homework
The pie chart illustrates the favourite meals people buy in restaurants or shops to eat at home in the UK - or we can call it “Takeaways”.
At first glance, it is clear that almost the Chinese takeaways in particular and Asian takeaways in general account for a large proportion which is shown in the chart.
According to the chart, with the amount of nearly 64%, Asian takeaways are definitely the best choice for British people because not only they could be cheap and taste good but also for the people who are busy at work, which include 34% like to eat Chinese takeaways, Indian ranked second with 26%. On the other hand, some people enjoy to eat Europe ones with 10% people choose Italian takeaways. Furthermore, British takeaways still accounted for a significant proportion with 9%. The others are Thai with 3%; Mexican, Japanese and Greek takeaways are equal with the proportion of 1%. Moreover, some people order the different food or they don’t know about where the food come from accounted for 4%. In the fact that takeaways make the earth become more polluted, or could be they have time to make their own meal by themselves, so 11% people choose not order takeaways.
Overall, the British people seem to like buying takeaways with a really high proportion which can be seen clearly on the pie chart.
(Ngoc Huyen)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The pie chart illustrates the favourite ...
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...he UK - or we can call it “Takeaways”. At first glance, it is clear that almost...
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...roportion which is shown in the chart. According to the chart, with the amount ...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy eating'.
Suggestion: enjoy eating
...ith 26%. On the other hand, some people enjoy to eat Europe ones with 10% people choose Ital...
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Line 4, column 864, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to order'
Suggestion: to order
...by themselves, so 11% people choose not order takeaways. Overall, the Brit...
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...11% people choose not order takeaways. Overall, the British people seem to like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, in general, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82173913043 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5187068329 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5943340503 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.222222222 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 5.23603664747 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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