IELTS 8 Test 3 Writing Task 1
As provided in two diagrams in combination depicts procedure of making cements and concrete which are used in house building aims. Generally speaking, fundamental action of mixing different mineral substances in combination with water and heating is the key note of manufacturing of cement and concrete.
According to the cement production diagram, the mixture of clay and limestone which are passed crusher, goes to rotating heater. Furthermore, after heating process, the mixed substances passes grinder, so the cement is ready for packaging. Moreover, in concrete production process, water, sand, gravel and already produced cement accumulated in concrete mixer which is the eventual step of concrete procedure. The product is ready to use in building purposes.
To end, methods and facilities that are necessary in cement and concrete making system are gathered in two diagrams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: KEY_NOTE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keynote'?
Suggestion: keynote
...mbination with water and heating is the key note of manufacturing of cement and concrete...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ready to use in building purposes. To end, methods and facilities that are ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66417910448 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8713116917 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.286247331 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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