The illustration below show how coffee is sometimes produced.

Essay topics:

The illustration below show how coffee is sometimes produced.

The process explains about various stages of how to produce coffee by drying method. Overall, there are 12 steps over 3 stages in the process, which begins with selecting the beans and ends with wrapping the coffee.

In the first stage, the beans are sorted manually by hand. Then, these beans are cleaned using sieve before they are dried in the sun for 1 month. During drying, coffee beans need to be raked and turned by farmers and then stored in the silo. Once this finish, the beans are ready to be delivered to the mill.

In the subsequent stage, the beans are processed in the mill by being hulled by the worker. After that in order to get coffee powder, filtering tools are needed to grade then beans. Following this, they are bagged into sacks.

After bagging process, the coffee powder are sold to distributors. And then they are roasted using a kind of machine. Finally, these coffee are wrapped up in attractive package and sold to the market.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are ready to be delivered to the mill. In the subsequent stage, the beans are p...
^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this coffee' or 'these coffees'?
Suggestion: this coffee; these coffees
...asted using a kind of machine. Finally, these coffee are wrapped up in attractive package an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, so, then, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68823529412 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14283226217 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5664143265 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4166666667 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836760242273 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335952355422 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440001541731 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558949276013 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228351567005 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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