International migration in UK

Essay topics:

International migration in UK

A glance at the provided graph and bar chart reveals information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008.

It is obvious that both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration are noticeably higher. Meanwhile, net migration followed a volatile pattern.

In 1999, the number of people who came to live in UK stood at over 450,000, whereas the emigration rate is just nearly 300000. From 1999 to 2004 , the figures for emigration was seen a slight change from 300000 to 350000, while the number of immigrants increased by nearly 150000. After that, the figure for emigration increased gradually to 400000 in 2006 before suddenly falling to nearly 320000 and reaching its peak with over 400000 at the end of period. At the same time, the immigration rate was seen a fluctuation and remained in 2008.

At the begin of the period, the figure for net migration was over 150,000 and remain at the similar level before reaching their peak in 2004, at nearly 250000. From 2004 to 2008, the net migration rates has seen a gradual decrease by approximately 100000.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is just nearly 300000. From 1999 to 2004 , the figures for emigration was seen a s...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... fluctuation and remained in 2008. At the begin of the period, the figure for net migra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98429319372 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6358077773 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7970539057 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113941074853 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610680231938 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632286304272 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934294435128 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544106930856 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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