Just for fun
Hello, long time no see
Do you know? A day passed, has many things to happen. Million people in the world die as lack water. Rich people extremely wasted water. And you? You don't waste water, do you? I hope so :))
Doctor is a good job . But anyone who wants to be a doctor must have a mind from within them. I personally like the profession of doctor . Must study well. Although I don't study well. And I'm improving it. Make my parents proud of me. Maybe it is no good. I used to imagine a dream that I would be rich. I am used to beaten by him. Great :))) it helping me grow up. Nobody here doesn't hate me. Just because I'm beautiful. So their hate me. They're jealous of me. Now, I have nothing. Have you any money? Should you give me some money? Please, just for fun. Although I have no money. But I love life. Thanks for your read :))
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Million'.
Suggestion: A Million
... day passed, has many things to happen. Million people in the world die as lack water. ...
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...le extremely wasted water. And you? You dont waste water, do you? I hope so : Docto...
^^^^
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o you? I hope so : Doctor is a good job . But anyone who wants to be a doctor mus...
^^
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...personally like the profession of doctor . Must study well. Although I dont study ...
^^
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...profession of doctor . Must study well. Although I dont study well. And Im improving it....
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...of doctor . Must study well. Although I dont study well. And Im improving it. Make m...
^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y well. Although I dont study well. And Im improving it. Make my parents proud of ...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[5]
Message: Did you mean 'beat'?
Suggestion: beat
...ream that I would be rich. I am used to beaten by him. Great : it helping me grow up. ...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...at : it helping me grow up. Nobody here doesnt hate me. Just because Im beautiful. So ...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...obody here doesnt hate me. Just because Im beautiful. So their hate me. Theyre jea...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: They're
...because Im beautiful. So their hate me. Theyre jealous of me. Now, I have nothing. Ha...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir hate me. Theyre jealous of me. Now, I have nothing. Have you any money? Should...
^^
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve me some money? Please, just for fun. Although I have no money. But I love life. Thank...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07975460123 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04747196316 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 8.94146341463 302% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 6.0 22.4926829268 27% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.3052170784 43.030603864 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 24.6296296296 112.824112599 22% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 6.03703703704 22.9334400587 26% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.18518518519 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129243971564 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039930955602 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148403203624 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525788668214 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743577465531 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 0.8 13.2329268293 6% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.77 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.1 10.3012195122 20% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 2.83 11.4140731707 25% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 2.5 11.4329268293 22% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.4 10.9970731707 40% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 3.0 11.0658536585 27% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.