In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
To begin, email has made communication, especially abroad, much simpler and faster, resulting in numerous benefits for commerce and business. Furthermore, the World Wide Web means that information on every conceivable subject is now available to us. For example, people can access news, medical advice, online education courses and much more via the internet. It is evident that these improvements have made life far easier and more convenient for large numbers of people and will continue to do so for decades to come.
Nevertheless, the effects of this new technology have not all been beneficial. For example, many people feel that the widespread use of email is destroying traditional forms of communication such as letter writing, telephone and face-to-face conversation. This could result in a decline in people's basic ability to socialize and interact with each other on a day-to-day basis.
In addition, the large size of the Web has meant that it is nearly impossible to regulate and control. This has led to many concerns regarding children accessing unsuitable websites and viruses. Unfortunately, this kind of problem might even get worse in the future at least until more regulated systems are set up.
Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'at least', 'for example', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253456221198 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.147465437788 0.116061578633 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124423963134 0.0759168565197 164% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0552995391705 0.0366838410393 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0138248847926 0.0131127313244 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124423963134 0.155750635184 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0460829493088 0.0379272487307 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96250078197 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.0210936926555 153% => OK
Particles: 0.00460829493088 0.00175180941692 263% => OK
Determiners: 0.0783410138249 0.0948980150116 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0184331797235 0.00437022459523 422% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1218.0 1161.00487805 105% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.9 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27835051546 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376288659794 0.337110787985 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314432989691 0.247514529752 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231958762887 0.171178102325 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159793814433 0.112407865282 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96250078197 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69587628866 0.546246751206 127% => OK
Word variations: 79.1397395159 49.3433353143 160% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8376490026 42.9750493124 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 135.714022679 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 50.8432989691 47.7609492067 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.95744680851 2.94281807926 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396616462731 0.418131533498 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0631055756316 0.181151798455 35% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0389849275245 0.0850326197045 46% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517346766914 0.706616315825 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0964599059733 0.157042692854 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157260624245 0.228904883108 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583875586331 0.108899403657 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282306437445 0.367819155151 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.004961773334 0.0812612215331 6% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276482801648 0.316326947829 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133378459391 0.0921553760075 14% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.