The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.
The given line graph provides a comparison of the volume of oil manufacture and
to consumption in China over a 24-year-period.
From an overall perspective, it is evident that both factors witnessed an upward during a period. Oil production is slightly different in its number whereas the demand for oil dramatically raises after 24 years.
According to the recorded data, the supply and demand of oil stood in the same pattern at the beginning. Subsequently, the oil consumption remained constant until 1990 while its production increased by 1 million oil barrels and was unchanged from 1994. Finally, the oil demand reach a peak in the end and was roughly higher than 2 times its production.
It can be stated that both elements experienced an upward trend. Obviously, oil consumption increased significantly in the 1990s and made a two-fold jump from 1990 to 1998, the statistic of oil consumption merely grew by 0.5 million barrels per day in 1998. Although the superior growth in the oil supply at the beginning of the period, the oil demand hosted the highest volume at the end. Finally, at the end of the period, the oil supply increased by 1.5 million barrels per day while its demand was up to 3 times when compared with initial number.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...of the volume of oil manufacture and to consumption in China over a 24-year-per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93867924528 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8508795555 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6358196092 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202315544919 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869720372435 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762312535325 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134761126032 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034779158281 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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