Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Today, there are many factors which help people to become a successful person. People think regions help people to become a successful person. Regions are one of the factors which help to become successful. There are other factors are motivation, potential, talent and hard work. In a further paragraph, we will discuss regions affect a successful person.
Firstly, native regions influence the person. Regions are into two parts rural and urban. People are bound to follow which they see in their surroundings. The Urban region have excel life they see potential and the successful people which help to motivate them. But, in a rural area, people only think about the survival of them. For example, many of the cricketers belong to metro cities so it influences people to see them and get motivated and follow their dreams. Therefore, thinks are different in a rural area there are no such environment and opportunities and they think only about a slice of bread to survive. This exemplifies that people influenced my regions they belong from.
The second reason, people belong from the small state also become a successful person. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani belongs from small cities of Gujarat and started their business reliance industries. Narendra Modi also belongs from small cities of Gujarat and he is prime minister of our country. It exemplifies, that regions do not matter it is all about motivation and hard work.
In conclusion, region and influence are the others factor which helps a person to become successful. The main point is determination and hard work which helps people to become successful. Thus, regions do not matter at all people matters and his hard work and determination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'excelled'.
Suggestion: excelled
...eir surroundings. The Urban region have excel life they see potential and the success...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...become a successful person. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani belongs from small citi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13214285714 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63161460099 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.749953271 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.85 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422487929433 0.215688989381 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156001779624 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10937839448 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256263308788 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994322269891 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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