The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

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The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant

The two maps demonstrate the significant modifications that have been made for the Spanish city of Castellon over the years from 2000 to present.

Overall, the maps highlight the striking developments that have been made in the Spanish city of Castellon from being ordinary to a metropolitan area. Similarly, various amenities with regard to public facilities are increased along with the city modernization.

In the year 2000, the city comprised of vapid infrastructure. A one-way road is constructed all the way from west to east for public transport. University beside woodland was located in the northern part of the city, while the port on the sea coast in the southern part, and a few facilities to the city in the west.

However, dramatic changes have been made over the years to the urban area, with construction of a new tramline connecting from the university in the north to the city center. Similarly, buildings for cinema, and bars and clubs are erected on the sea shore in the south, also on the other side of these mansion’s there is a path for pedestrians, once it was used by automobiles. Another spectacular change is that a new covered market, airport and new shopping center have been constructed by cutting down the forest area in the east of the city. Although there was no accommodation for the university students in the past, a new hall of residence has been built in the north-west corner. Additionally, a few developments are the old market and train station in the west of the city were knocked down to make way for a new shop and police station, and a new train station has been built next to the police station.

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Average: 8.6 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d along with the city modernization. In the year 2000, the city comprised of...
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... In the year 2000, the city comprised of vapid infrastructure. A one-way road ...
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...ransport. University beside woodland was located in the northern part of the cit...
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... University beside woodland was located in the northern part of the city, while ...
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... facilities to the city in the west. However, dramatic changes have been made...
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...in the south, also on the other side of these mansion’s there is a path for pedestrians, once...
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...corner. Additionally, a few developments are the old market and train station in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86267605634 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85877980957 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0210081412 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101152771667 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452248129173 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452495820066 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826227720122 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420963548487 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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