The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the redevelopment of an industrial area.
Overall, there are some new changes in the industrial plant, with the appearance of the residential zone and the disappearance of the offices and eating house. It is also noticeable that there will be the relocation of the parking lot.
At present, the industrial site is quite simple. It is a compound surrounded by 4 main roads, which are Chimney Road, Pie Walk, Swallow Street and Toe Lane. In the middle of the site, there is a big yard. In the north, there is an entrance together with a reception area. To the west of the yard stands a car park and to the east a factory. There is a series of offices and a small canteen to the south of the yard. Next to the cluster of the offices is a warehouse.
In the future, the industrial site will experience massive changes. The most prominent one will be the emergence of the residential area with 2-bedroom houses attached to the gardens for the community in the north. The series of offices will be removed to make way for parking garages for residents. The space for the storage area will be replaced by the 3-bedroom and 4-bedroom residences. In the east the factory will be converted into the apartment. The parking area will be expanded and relocated to the north of the apartment. Private roads will be erected within this communal place. The only components which will be left intact are the 4 main roads.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... way for parking garages for residents. The space for the storage area will be repl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63921568627 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64293360477 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0314649807 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7222222222 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.09268292683 391% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842944630434 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344112843179 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508986434378 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837391379006 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711722368775 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... way for parking garages for residents. The space for the storage area will be repl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63921568627 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64293360477 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0314649807 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7222222222 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.09268292683 391% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842944630434 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344112843179 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508986434378 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837391379006 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711722368775 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.