The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Essay topics:

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The pictures illustrate how would the layout of the centre changed in the future.

Overall, significant changes have been made in terms of the delivery of the main road. Additionally, more infrastructures include the bus station, car park, pedestrians only will be appeared.

The road will be lengthened which will be followed around the centre and the appearance of dual carriageway, while it is being limited now. In the northwest area of the centre town, bus station will be built and there will be a construction of a car park.

To the north of the centre, countryside area will be disappeared. In addition, there are much more new housing will be constructed in the north-east and the south-east; however, the main road now will be demolished to make way for pedestrians only.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 132.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99242424242 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9920598167 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8925632681 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0672851512863 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338464821853 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298151252018 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427668306735 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274180553693 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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