The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university
The maps illustrate the main changes which are predicted to undergo in a specific college of Biology School.
Generally, it is clear that the Biology school is going to extend its campus with numerous modifications and also the addition of various facilities.
As we can see, the biggest building in the center of Biology school is the central library which is projected to stay the same after some adjustments. Immediately to the right hand side of the central library is the drama centre building which is planned to be replaced by the music centre. At the top of the campus, a group of trees are forecast to make way for a new lab and office. Moving to the top right hand side of Biology school, the indoor sports hall is still available for future design.
Regarding to the other side of the school, a new teaching building and lecture room are expected to be erected opposite the old ones. An IT centre building is planned to widen its size to the bottom right hand corner of the campus. While the cafe is keep intact, the road running from the top left hand corner to the bottom left hand corner is reduced in length combine with the disappearance of trees nearby to construct a new car park for staffs.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a specific college of Biology School. Generally, it is clear that the Biology ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so the addition of various facilities. As we can see, the biggest building in t...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hand side of Biology school, the indoor sports hall is still available for future desi...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is still available for future design. Regarding to the other side of the schoo...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'An' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: An; IT
...ed to be erected opposite the old ones. An IT centre building is planned to widen its...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centres'?
Suggestion: centres
...be erected opposite the old ones. An IT centre building is planned to widen its size t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57339449541 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42710839207 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5760357683 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152037621594 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687981983108 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054930295597 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105224875402 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472370366706 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a specific college of Biology School. Generally, it is clear that the Biology ...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so the addition of various facilities. As we can see, the biggest building in t...
^^^
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hand side of Biology school, the indoor sports hall is still available for future desi...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is still available for future design. Regarding to the other side of the schoo...
^^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'An' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: An; IT
...ed to be erected opposite the old ones. An IT centre building is planned to widen its...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centres'?
Suggestion: centres
...be erected opposite the old ones. An IT centre building is planned to widen its size t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57339449541 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42710839207 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5760357683 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152037621594 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687981983108 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054930295597 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105224875402 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472370366706 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.