THE NUMBER OF CARS MADE IN THREE COUNTRIES IN 2003, 2006, 2009

Essay topics:

THE NUMBER OF CARS MADE IN THREE COUNTRIES IN 2003, 2006, 2009

The table gives information about automobile production in Argentina, Australia and Thailand over a period of 7 years.

It is clear that of the three countries,Thailand is the largest car manufacturer and also experienced the fastest growth. While car production rates in Thailand and Argentina increased over the period shown, there was a fall in the numbers of cars made in Australia.

As is presented in the diagram, in 2003, car industry in Thailand produced 735,852 total cars while the figure for Australia stood at just half that amount. Only about 235,000 cars were made in Argentina at the same time. By 2006, Thailand car production increased significantly and reached a peak at 1,162,356. That also the highest figure in the chart.

After 2006, the rate for Thailand remained the highest despite falling gradually to nearly 1,000,000. While the number of cars manufactured in Australia fell sequentially to just under 250,000, a drop of 200,000 cars, that of Argentina experience an upward trend.

Votes
Average: 9.1 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Thailand
... It is clear that of the three countries,Thailand is the largest car manufacturer and als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23926380368 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97487186646 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.464991298 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224903491318 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920799467685 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627833129766 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127057729501 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891362549564 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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