Parcels delivered by Federal Express and TNT Mail Services
A glance at the diagram reveals a number of clear comparisons between two major mail services companies during the 1920 and 2000.
As precisely seen from the diagram that there some radical alternations have occurred merely in Federal Express. However, it is interesting fact that TNT risen gradually without any fells. It is observed that Federal Express and TNT stood at (15000 and 5000 respectively) in the first year. Afterwards, FedEx boomed dramatically and it reached roughly 24000 in 1940. Following the decade, this trend dropped sharply and that rate remained approximately 12000 until 1960. Over the next several decades (i. e 1960 and 1970), we can see a dramatic increase whilst during the last three decades FedEx leveled off and remained in 18000. Moving to the next trend, it can be clearly seen that TNT grown steadily between 1960 and 1980. Over the next year, TNT rocketed sharply and it reached slightly less than 25000 in 2000.
Overall, initially, FedEx was in high point whereas TNT was in lower tempo. By contrast, TNT legged behind FedEx in the last part of our report.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95108695652 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44924253365 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8654370412 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9166666667 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199183143776 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622828150933 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599875867942 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111767077659 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275033308163 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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