The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.
Sports ----- boys 6-11---- boys 12-16
football 87 78
basketball 35 25
cricket 45 34
rugby 23 21
swimming 19 19
The bart chart illustrates the propotion of boys in two different age groups who took part in 5 different activity in the UK in the year 2010.
Overall, boys aged 6 to 10 did more of each activity than 12-to-16 year-olds ( except for swimmning). Another visible trend is that, both two groups swimming were equal.
Football was much more preferred by boys between 6 and 11 years old than by older boys. The figures were 87% and 78% respectively. Likewise, basketball also attracted boys aged 6 to 10 than 12-to-16 year-old boys. In this activity, younger boys joined 35%, whereas the finger for older boys was 25%. 45% of boys boys between 6 and 11 years old participated cricket, compared to 34% 12-to-16 year-old boys.
The percentage of boys in both two age groups took part in swimming were equal, at 19%. In contrast. The propotion of boys aged 6 and 11 years old played rugbyed was 23%. The finger for older boys were lower, at 21%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, so, whereas, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63473053892 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47924440146 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520958083832 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3945940277 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393951534168 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152589934765 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997424812615 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271577081543 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823518741492 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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