The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000 The total budget was AED 315 billion Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

The given circular graph represents the information about spending of UAE’s government in 2000. The data is calibrated in AED.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that maximum money was spent on social security, however, transport sector received the lowest amount out of UAE’s budget.

In year 2000, UAE government decided to spend 315 billion AED out of which merely 9 billion AED was contributed towards development of transportation. Industry, farming and employment also received just 13 billion AED. To maintain law and order in country, government devoted 17 billion AED which was 2 billion AED more than that spent for clean environment and maintaining the heritage of houses.

Shifting towards the remaining information, 23 billion AED was consumed from total budget just to pay interest on debt and same amount paid for other expenditures. For two major sectors in progress of nation, the government expended 22 billion AED and 38 billion AED for defence and education respectively. The sum paid for social security of nation was 100 billion AED and fund expended on health and personal social services was nearly half the amount disbursed on social security.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29787234043 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8071805361 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1862170798 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210785320252 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906632489846 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701800103604 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130688266133 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484708842866 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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