The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010.

The pie graphs illustrate the information about the electricity generation by source in two countries: New Zealand and Germany from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, as can be seen, coal was the main source in New Zealand to generate electricity, while nuclear energy did not use in this country. Another visible trend is that in Germany, nuclear source reached the highest point in 2010.
Looking at the detail in New Zealand, the proportion of coal was 56 units in 1980. The figure in 2010 was higher, nearly 3 times compared to in 1980, at 150 units. In the years 1980, hydro and natural gas accounted for 30 units. However, New Zealand witnessed a dramatic decline in natural gas, at only 2 units, and having the same percentage with petroleum in the next 30 years.
In terms of Germany, 28 units of coal and natural gas were made use of generating electricity in 1980, compared to 28 units of coal and 2 units of natural gas in the year 2010. The period from 1980 to 2010 experienced a significant growth in nuclear, from 20 units to 155 units. By contrast, the figures for hydro and petroleum fluctuated slightly.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6887755102 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58203090419 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3417996353 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319613268256 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130661757008 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126548691157 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235651747186 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147077908491 0.0819641961636 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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