The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island according to a survey of visitors

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

The two pie charts describe the opinions of travellers in a survey in terms of the most common benefits and drawbacks of Bowen Island.

Overall, it can be seen that the high cost of living accounts for the largest proportion of disadvantages for Bowen island residents, while the people have the most significant proportion of advantages.

The biggest problem of Bowen inhabitants is the high cost of living, which is 50%. Likewise, the entertainment takes the second place of the issues, at a quarter. Food quality makes up the least percentage of disadvantage, five time as high as the figure for the weather.

In comparison, over 40% of the benefit is responsible for the people. In contrast, just above 10% of the positive is in terms of good accommodation. There is only 12% of the advantage is culture, while the scenery has a significant impact on the benefit of people on Bowen island, which is 35%.

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Average: 7.9 (25 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, second, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9142001405 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8410944655 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222022537863 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081341731574 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114636641694 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145761002051 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12460804064 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

The circular pie charts depict the information pertaining to the basic banefits as well as drawbacks obtained by a survey that conducted by touristors in Bomen island .
It is manifested from first glimpse that most common feature of distraction is high cost for living in bomen island, half of people do not visit island because of expensive cost. Every one in ten visitors do not satisfied from the quality of food. A quarter of individuals distract owing to poor sources of entertainment. some of individuals dislike the weather conditions of island, 15% travellers influenced by the weather
Further scrutinizing the chart , most of tourists visit bomen island because they love the company of bomen island natives ,amounting to 42%. The view of bomen island attract 35% travellers to visit it. 12% of visitors attracted toward the tradition of bomen island. 11% of tourists impressed by the great means of stay there.

Overall , it is crystal clear that half of visitors distract by the cost of Bomen island living whereas most of tourists attract by the behavior of island dwellers.