The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The mentioned pie chart illustrates the e-shopping revenues for retail areas over a decade from 2003 to 2013 in New Zealand.
Overall, as is represented by the pie charts, in 2003 the proportion of sales in the travel sector had the highest position whereas book accounted for the lowest ratio. Similarly, in 2013 the first rank was obtained by film and music while clothes contributed the least percentage of sales in New Zealand.
It is clear from the pie chart, the rate of travel slightly declined over a decade from 36 % to 29%. Furthermore, the figure of sales in clothes also dropped moderately from 24% to 16%.
However, the proportion of sales in film and music boosted significantly from 21 % to 33% which contributed highest percentage for sales in retail sectors. Similarly, steady growth in the figure of books sales was also noticed from 19 % to 22% which was third largest ratio in the total sales online in 2013.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'contributed the highest'.
Suggestion: contributed the highest
...ed significantly from 21 % to 33% which contributed highest percentage for sales in retail sectors....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89308176101 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63983991238 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3584922313 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 5.23603664747 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362868798245 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163529292729 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102955889706 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232213437408 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111892078091 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.