The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

Essay topics:

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

The pie charts represent the six reasons (formal study, accompany, looking for work, definite job, no reason started and other reasons) for people to come in and left the UK in the year of 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the main factor influencing this decision was employment including looking for work and followed by a companion and formal study reasons and no reasons and other reasons.
The biggest portion was definite job of 30% people immigrated to the UK and 29% emigrated from the UK, whereas looking for a job reported of 12% immigrate to the UK and 22% emigrate from the UK.
Meanwhile, the formal study and accompanying reasons was the next biggest portion. About 26% of people moved in to the UK in compared to 4% moved out from the UK. Similarly, accompanying reasons was 15% for immigrants and 13% for emigrants.
In terms of no reasons or other reasons had about 17% people immigrated to the UK, while 22% of people emigrated from the UK. In detail, 11% of people had other reasons for immigration contrast to 14% of emigration and vice versa.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'similarly', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in fact']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.304147465438 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.129032258065 0.116061578633 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0645161290323 0.0759168565197 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.00921658986175 0.0366838410393 25% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00460829493088 0.0131127313244 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0691244239631 0.0379272487307 182% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.5754978929 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.0210936926555 153% => OK
Particles: 0.00460829493088 0.00175180941692 263% => OK
Determiners: 0.101382488479 0.0948980150116 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1066.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70053475936 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331550802139 0.337110787985 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256684491979 0.247514529752 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160427807487 0.171178102325 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101604278075 0.112407865282 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5754978929 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491978609626 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.1386296002 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.375 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6779044555 42.9750493124 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 135.714022679 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 49.0434491979 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 3.61290322581 2.94281807926 123% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.612795250185 0.418131533498 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.176569276527 0.181151798455 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.125990877756 0.0850326197045 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.774535901379 0.706616315825 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205437512975 0.157042692854 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.325197367876 0.228904883108 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142835564009 0.108899403657 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355780415344 0.367819155151 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119019103975 0.0812612215331 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.41797632901 0.316326947829 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118445052191 0.0921553760075 129% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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