The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
The map below provides a comparison of the appearance of the airport's site before and after its refurbishment in the next year.
By comparing the present day and the following day of the airport area, certain alterations are noteworthy. From an overall perspective, it is apparent that the airport will expand more service spots and open more gates for clients.
According to the data on the airport's map, it is evident that the departure zone at the present day just merely consists of the café shop to the right of the upper corner and the check-in area which is in the opposite direction of the café. However, no services exist in the arrivals area. After the redevelopment, the bag drop service appeared in the departures area while the check-in make way for the café's location, and the café store is moved to the left of the lower corner. Moreover, the café, ATM, and car hire service will newly appear in the arrivals area after the redecoration.
Nevertheless, the security passport control and passport control customs remain unchanged over the development and shops will be located among the security passport control area. At the present day, there are simply eight gates and two walkways which are situated in gate one and gate three. After the reconstruction, the airport will have more than double gates when compared with today's numbers, and instead of using the walkway machine, customers will be transported by the sky train which will be located in the central of the waiting lounge.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...café. However, no services exist in the arrivals area. After the redevelopment, the bag ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...t, the bag drop service appeared in the departures area while the check-in make way for th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cafés'' or 'café's'?
Suggestion: cafés'; café's
...rea while the check-in make way for the cafés location, and the café store is moved t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...r hire service will newly appear in the arrivals area after the redecoration. Neverthel...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94094488189 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61977923239 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9726552602 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17034829423 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719367850976 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826375345842 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132916301443 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917304196996 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...café. However, no services exist in the arrivals area. After the redevelopment, the bag ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...t, the bag drop service appeared in the departures area while the check-in make way for th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cafés'' or 'café's'?
Suggestion: cafés'; café's
...rea while the check-in make way for the cafés location, and the café store is moved t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...r hire service will newly appear in the arrivals area after the redecoration. Neverthel...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94094488189 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61977923239 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9726552602 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17034829423 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719367850976 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826375345842 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132916301443 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917304196996 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.