The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the process of preparing dough for baking a pizza.
From an overall perspective, it is highlighted that the recipe contains 4 main ingredients and 7 parts to create a dough, beginning with put all the ingredients in a bowl and ending with separate for 3 section whose weight 275 grams per each.
According to the picture, the chef need 4 cups or half of kilograms of flour, one and half cup or 325 grams of water. Next are 2 teaspoon salt and half of teaspoon dry active yeast which will dilate the dough in the waiting time. First of all, we need to put all of these materials in a bowl and mix for 2 minutes at the slow level of mixer machine. Moving to the third step, dough is continued to be mixed at the medium rate for the next 5 minutes and turn back to the low level for the last 2 minutes.
Moving to the fifth step, dough is taken out the mixer machine and sponged at the outside. Following that, after at least 2 hours, the flour mixture become double in its size. Subsequently, the worker knead and work the dough in order to ensure that there is no air bubbles in a dough. Finally, it is cut and separate for 3 equal pieces or 275 grams and will be use for make a pizzacrust later.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, third, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2735042735 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3410535692 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9350642594 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153128334684 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608658319631 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540099775317 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105691793946 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487927769314 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, third, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2735042735 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3410535692 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9350642594 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153128334684 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608658319631 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540099775317 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105691793946 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487927769314 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.