The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Several phases in the process of making a powder mixture for a pizza are depicted in the diagram.
From a prospective outlook, there are four ingredients in total. Moreover, the method consists of seven stages from blending to resting and kneading.
From a quick glance at the diagram, the combination for three pizza bases includes 4 cups of 00 flour, one and a half cups of water, 2 teaspoons of salt and a half teaspoon of dry active yeast. At the commencement stage, these components are put in the stand mixer. Prior to being blended at a medium speed for 5 minutes, the dough goes through a two-minute slow mixing process. Subsequently, the pace of the mixer minimizes to its original speed for another two minutes.
Moving on to analyse the remaining phases of the diagram, once the mixing stages finish, the combination is left to rest and rise. Penultimately, after its size has witnessed a two-fold increase attributed to the impact of the dry yeast, the dough is kneaded to remove all air bubbles. Ultimately, the dough is separated into three parts or 275 grams each.

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Average: 9.1 (8 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k glance at the diagram, the combination for three pizza bases includes 4 cups of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80213903743 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72262369822 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6227207546 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119109679802 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456746989312 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642795760284 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839668990236 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833111884391 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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