The quality of life in four countries

Essay topics:

The quality of life in four countries

The table compares four nations in terms of the standards of living through 4 elements.

Overall, it can be seen that the USA is a country owning the best quality of life in 4 countries while Bangladesh is considered as an opposite side.

Regarding the USA and Bangladesh, America saw its GNP per head was 13,160 dollars in 1982 while the figure for Bangladesh only was at 140 dollars. Additionally, relating to the indicators of daily calorie supply and life expectancy, the figures of America was also over higher than those of Bangladesh. However, this country had nearly twelve times more infant death rate than the USA.

Turning to other three countries, living standard in Egypt was better than Indonesia and Bolivia. The life expectancy in this nation was 56 years while the figures of Indonesia and Bolivia were 49 and 50 years respectively. Meanwhile, for GNP per head, Indonesia saw the slightly higher figure compare to Bolivia, 580 and 570 dollars correspondingly. Finally, the infant mortality in Bolivia was highest, at 132 deaths per 1000 live births.

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Average: 8.3 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05617977528 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74159605811 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4716464382 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173164008274 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687688817597 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954472521665 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127197241018 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112850327801 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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