Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and five your opinion.
It has always been a highly controversial issue about sharing typical information. Some people, however, argue that the most important data should not expose. I agree with this viewpoint, but only in some cases. For serious approaches, world community has to acknowledge and discuss about its suitability.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that releasing military plans to society take the number of soldiers at risk. The terrorists might attack there and this definitely affects to the status of government. Furthermore, certain individual documents would be protected from illegal proposes. For example, personal phone numbers in various forms might be sold to other agents which use them for finance robbery. Another potential problem is competitive information amongst similar business, if an exclusive recipe is revealed, it would give a chance for their opponents adapt and entirely occupy customer group, reaching less profit. The authorities relating mentioned problems now concern and effort to impose strict measures.
On the other hand, economy growth dependents on sharing information to other nations. For instance, roadmap for each country could guide foreign investors to spend money and decide to place production sector which spread the wealth to local dwellers. Secondary, medical cooperation could make more benefits from public diagnosis data. Many severe diseases need expert doctors who have noticeable ideas from different aspects. According to scientific innovations, for example, Thailand could go through oil spill over Andaman gulf with help from the American company which regulated contamination and recovered to better situation.
All things considered, both of arguments have their merits, but sensitive information should be the secret.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 965.302439024 158% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71804511278 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76698114098 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 106.607317073 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.740601503759 0.547539520022 135% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.456667209 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132239946279 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413097924135 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485097823973 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839110429693 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349879926058 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 40.7170731707 255% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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