Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both these views and give your o

Generally speaking, that going to another country with different language, In order to communication with native people in their region, is the single solution for learning new language. Although, there is another view that some people are disagree with the Idea which came up above meanwhile I will be consider both point of views before a conclusion.

Nowadays, In each country we can find many language institutes that everyone can register there with any level of income. usually they offer different methods of teaching in the professional ways moreover they have numerous students with higher in rank that could even overcome difficult linguistic exams too.

In this era, with advent of technology specially TV, computer and internet, every body can surf in variety of websites in the field of teaching language then easily they can join to the relative levels of its educational process online.

For example, if some body interested to learn English there is a enormous web pages on the internet with many options that it would able us to enroll for online courses from basic to advance even for free.

In conclusion, not only it is necessary for knowing another language to travel to abroad but also there is no any limitation in learning a foreign language in your own country.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...gle solution for learning new language. Although there is another view that some people ...
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Suggestion: disagreed
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...oth point of views before a conclusion. Nowadays, In each country we can find ma...
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Suggestion: many languages
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...egister there with any level of income. usually they offer different methods of teachin...
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...vercome difficult linguistic exams too. In this era, with advent of technology s...
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...dy interested to learn English there is a enormous web pages on the internet with...
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...e to travel to abroad but also there is no any limitation in learning a foreign la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06542056075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57593219531 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663551401869 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.8782540874 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.857142857 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182728905953 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855521573304 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886269389757 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105152555958 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098235527868 0.056905535591 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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