Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, learning a new language has become increasingly popular. It is often a debatable issue across the globe that some people often believe that studying a foreign language aids solemnly for tourism and work purposes, whereas others feel that it has several benefits such as enhancing cognitive abilities and fostering a new culture. In my opinion, I completely agree with the latter choice and in this essay I will discuss both views along with proper conclusion.
To commence with, learning a second language can provide a happy path to any immigrants or travelers without any hindrances in communicating with local communities. In other words, speaking and understanding a native dialect can lessen the complexity in expressing the thoughts to people abroad. To illustrate, English has become the second most popular language among the nations, and is used as an ideal style to interact in international business meetings.
In contrast, starting the journey with non-native language can also enhance the cognitive skills among the individuals. This development can help a person to improve creativity and analytical thinking capability. For instance, a recent study stated that children who were bilingual witnessed a drastic improvement in reading, writing and speaking modules than normal children without any knowledge of other languages.
Furthermore, I firmly believe that the journey of foreign language is accompanied by it’s own culture. Moreover, this will facilitate people to widen their knowledge on various rituals and traditions among the nations.
To recapitulate, when it comes to language, people frequently divide their opinions, some state that acquaintance with other languages can help to migrate or work in different regions, whereas others agree that this learning can provide a lot of merits beyond travel or work.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideal style to interact in international business meetings. In contrast, start...
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
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...y of foreign language is accompanied by it’s own culture. Moreover, this will facili...
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Suggestion:
... a lot of merits beyond travel or work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 965.302439024 164% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58098591549 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92692483848 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 283.868780488 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9007476917 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.083333333 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202557255826 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710297165086 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511602507317 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114323925125 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050499752755 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 40.7170731707 221% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideal style to interact in international business meetings. In contrast, start...
^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: IT_IS[13]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...y of foreign language is accompanied by it’s own culture. Moreover, this will facili...
^^^^
Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a lot of merits beyond travel or work.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, whereas, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 965.302439024 164% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58098591549 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92692483848 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 283.868780488 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9007476917 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.083333333 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202557255826 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710297165086 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511602507317 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114323925125 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050499752755 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 40.7170731707 221% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.