Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
With more and more people attach their importance to sports exercise, they pay more into doing sports. Some well-known sports professionals have opportunities to get higher paid, thanks to the popularity of fitness and the importance of sports. It is controversial that some of them even get paid a great deal of money much more than people in other important professions.
Some people think it is fully reasonable for sports professionals to get higher salary because it takes a lot of effort for athletes to train. Some high-intensity training may spoil their health. For instance, Weili Zhang, the MMA athlete, always gets badly hurts during competitions and training. Such kind of athletes deserve a great deal more money than people in other fields. On the other hand, some national-level athletes won honors for their country in some international games, and because of the previous intensive training, their sports careers are so short that their country principally give them generous subsidies after their retirement.
On the contrary, some people consider that it is unnecessary to give them so much money. Compared with some professional fields, sports field is not that specialized. Though more and more people pay more time and money in sports exercise and gym, it is unfair to give much more salary to a personal trainer than a doctor or a scientist. In a word, some people have the opposite views that some of the sports professionals make even less social contribution than some people in other important professions.
In my point of view, how much money the sports professions can get depends on the what specific job they have. For athletes, they deserve high salary because of their job specification and the pressure and risk they have. However, also as sports experts, some personal trainers or some sports guiders whose jobs are much more relaxing and unspecialized have no rights to ask a higher salary than the experts in some other important professions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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...ts in some other important professions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 965.302439024 193% => OK
No of words: 363.0 196.424390244 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13223140496 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79453196257 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465564738292 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 283.868780488 200% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6805261079 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532703903963 0.215688989381 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196017821173 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15172489451 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386298003974 0.15604864568 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.28982828364 0.0819641961636 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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