Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Role model is someone to which youngsters look up to. A role model can be anyone from your family member to glamorous film or sports star. The current younger generation is more inclined towards film or sports star, as a role model compared to others and why shouldn’t they not be.
These stars have all the luxuries and enchantments one can think of. People try to be like them by following them on social media, using clothes, bags, etc. endorsed by stars. Sometime this idolization turns into obsession which sways youngsters to a wrong path. In movies celebrities are shown doing extraordinary activities, partying, drinking, etc. and being their idol, youngster follows the same, thus having negative influence on them.
There are also instances when sports or film star role model has shaped the future of a youngster. For ex, Virat Kohli current Indian Cricket team captain looked up to Sachin Tendulkar as role model. Many younger film stars has looked up to Amitabh Bacchan and strived hard to be successful. These person were motivation for them to be successful.
This shows that sport or film stars as a role model can lead a youngster to right or wrong path depending upon guidance and motivation provided. Youngsters should not only look up to their flamboyant lifestyle, but the hard work they have done to achieve that. Media should also restrain itself from promoting negative activities of stars. Stars should responsibly promote things, as it directly impacts youngsters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'These people', 'These persons'?
Suggestion: This person; These people; These persons
...chan and strived hard to be successful. These person were motivation for them to be successf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1012145749 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62848775157 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1764132553 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1176470588 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318762836688 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102280968377 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106238743208 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206439790754 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107966340698 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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