The table and pie chart show in percentage terms the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.

Essay topics:

The table and pie chart show in percentage terms the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand.

The table and pie chart illustrate the percentage result of a survey, based on customers opinions about a new shopping commercial in Auckland, New Zealand.

Overall, it is clear that customers show their general satisfaction with the complex and the overwhelming majority of both sexes approved of the design.

There was a greater proportion of women than men dislike the restaurants, which were only 5% of males displeased with the restaurants, compared to 21% of the females. In addition, the restaurants receive a lot more positive rating overall among men than among women, at 80% and 59% respectively.

In comparison, there were more men than women made no comment about the shops. As regards, an equal number of both sexes say they were unhappy with the shops.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, as regards, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15748031496 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82559798415 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6682242651 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22667363236 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111538509612 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219672485271 0.0843802449381 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167307764418 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.251104304688 0.0819641961636 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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