The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table chart illustrates the performance of three branches in terms of food in Vancouver in the year 2016.
Overall, as can be seen, Georgia Street was the best place to trade in a chain of Vancouver’s restaurants. Another visible trend is that the proportion of eat-in restaurants and take-away transactions were slightly equal in each agency, and take-away transactions were higher compared to eat-in almost all the branches surveyed.
The performance of trades in Georgia Street was 854 in 2016. The figures for Dunsmuir and Drake Street were lower, at 750 and 390 respectively. Therefore, Ge...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...e figures for Dunsmuir and Drake Street were lower, at 750 and 390 respectively. The...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...respectively. Therefore, Georgia Street was ahead concerning the transaction value with 10.69$, whil...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$69'.
Suggestion: $69
...oncerning the transaction value with 10.69$, while 5.61$ and 9.02$ were respective ...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$61'.
Suggestion: $61
... transaction value with 10.69$, while 5.61$ and 9.02$ were respective rates of Duns...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$02'.
Suggestion: $02
...on value with 10.69$, while 5.61$ and 9.02$ were respective rates of Dunsmuir and D...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, so, therefore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38043478261 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07258980805 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5141789828 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0579396619027 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354953816088 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372761086647 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536672913633 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432177226077 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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