The table below gives information about UK independent films.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the information about independent films released in UK and republic of Ireland in 2012.and also shows the different genres of movies like comedy, horror, Drama, action and its ticket sales income proportion.
As we can see the statistic of table, Drama and Documentary movies are high numbers of releases which is 35 each, 23.6 % of total numbers of releases. But the incomes of these movies are dramatically low which is 8.3 % and 2.9% respectively. Meanwhile, Comedy films has great success rate to over viewing the financial income (45.4 %), by releasing only 26 numbers.
On the other hand thriller and horror movies have third highest numbers of releases 13 and 14 respectively. However, horror movies are the second highest gross collection films which have 20.2 % of ticket sales income. The romance films have lowest selling incoming record which is only 0.8%. Meanwhile, Biopic movies have significant selling record where only one release and earn 9.1% of income.
Overall we can say that in UK comedy, horror and biopic movies get impressive commercially success during 2012. However, Action, crime and romance movies are released at the same time but the ticket selling income was gradually lower compare to other movies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the lowest'.
Suggestion: have the lowest
... ticket sales income. The romance films have lowest selling incoming record which is only 0...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21393034826 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54319027517 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7221600621 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.054076885319 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209703238509 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438467224325 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447944489138 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595329450355 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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