The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart depicts knowledge on how people spent their National Expenditure on various consumer goods across various regions of the World in the year 2002.

Overall Turkey was the Highest spendor and Spain was the least spendor on such Consumer Products. Food/Drinks/Tobacco
products gained more popularity than other items.

Highest spendors on Food and related items were people from Turkey and Ireland. They spent around 30 percent of their incomes which was much Higher compared to other countries like Sweden which was least interested.

Italians however paid a chunk of around 9 percent to invest in personal items like Clothing and Footwear.
Sweden remained least interested as usual with investment of around 5.5 percent, However big surprise came from the Turks and Irish which spent only about 6.5 percent respectively.

Last but not the least, People of Turkey again topped the list of spending only for this time the items were related to Leisure / Education which was around 4.3 percent. Swedish and Italians came close with their spending of around 3.2 percent. Spanish were least bothered to spend on Items for Leisure /Education with only 1.98 percent going to this category.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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... spending of around 3.2 percent. Spanish were least bothered to spend on Items fo...
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...to spend on Items for Leisure /Education with only 1.98 percent going to this cat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47960891298 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1928003687 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0613884274793 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285320275831 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0169472838864 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0275945732742 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205424739646 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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