The table below shows the consumer durables owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
The table compares the consumption of different electronical assets used in British househlds over a period of 11 years, from 1972 to 1983.
Overall, it is clear that the utilization of such consumer durables increased over the pass of the years.
Television accounted for the largest propotion in usage since the very beginning of the time frame. In 1972, 93% of British people owned a television, figures which obtained a steady increase by 5%. In contrast, despite central heating representing the lowest percentage of usege in 1072 (estimated at around 3%), this surged to 64% at the end of the span.
In addiction, it is noticeable that two of the electronical items were not introduced into British households until later on in the time frame. Dishwasher started being used in 1978, a mere usage of 3% which increased by 2% in 1983. The video was the other asset which had been used for the first time in 1983, by 18% of the British population. Moreover, it is worth mentioning that vaccum cleaners, which accounted for a major usage throught the whole period, disapeared from British homes at the end of the span.
figures which obtained a steady increase by 5%.
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a mere usage of 3% which increased by 2% in 1983.
a mere usage of 3% which is increased by 2% in 1983.
Sentence: The table compares the consumption of different electronical assets used in British househlds over a period of 11 years, from 1972 to 1983.
Error: househlds Suggestion: households
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Sentence: Television accounted for the largest propotion in usage since the very beginning of the time frame.
Error: propotion Suggestion: proportion
Sentence: In contrast, despite central heating representing the lowest percentage of usege in 1072 estimated at around 3, this surged to 64 at the end of the span.
Error: usege Suggestion: usage
Sentence: In addiction, it is noticeable that two of the electronical items were not introduced into British households until later on in the time frame.
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Sentence: Moreover, it is worth mentioning that vaccum cleaners, which accounted for a major usage throught the whole period, disapeared from British homes at the end of the span.
Error: disapeared Suggestion: disappeared
Error: throught Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: vaccum Suggestion: vacuum
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
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No. of Different Words: 111 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.722 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.667 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
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Sentence Length SD: 4.269 7.5
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