The given diagram illustrates the data about the population by age group and how that proportion changed between 2011 and 2012 in New Zealand.
What stands out from the diagram is that while the percentage of people aged 40-46 and more than 65 improved, the two remaining age groups experienced a moderate reduce. In addition, the group of people over 65+ had the highest percentage of change in the table mentioned.
In the diagram, although the 15-39 age group had the plunge percentage with -0.2%, it still was highest, at 1,577,256 in 2011 and 1,574,102 in 2012. In contrast, the group of 40-46 years of age was 1,331,907 in 2011 before witnessing an upward trend with 0,6 percents of change to 1,339,898 in 2012.
Besides, the group under 15 ranked the second with 898,160 after plunging to 896,364 at the end of comparing period, at -0,2 percents of change. Similarly, the 40-46, the age group more than 65 also saw a marked soar with the percentage of change was 4,0%. All 4 age groups had the leap in percentage of change, at 0,6%. The figure for that was 4,381,269 and 4,410,284 in 2011 and 2012, respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...,577,256 in 2011 and 1,574,102 in 2012. In contrast, the group of 40-46 years of a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, second, similarly, so, still, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73979591837 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54072924201 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9818397398 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294878039301 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134175812298 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956168395288 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211646791589 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103451096786 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.