The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table breakdown, number of visitors to ash down museum before and after it was renovated.
The pie charts illustrate result of surveys from visitors about the satisfaction with their visit during the same two periods. A glance at the diagram clearly reveals
after modernized, number of satisfied visitors have increased where as dis satisfaction among visitors got reduced.
Firstly, before refurbishment only 74000 visitors have visited the museum. Whereas, after reconstruction there is a huge surge in number of visitors.
Secondly, comparing the pie charts, In the first pie chart 40 per cent visitors were dissatisfied and 30 per cent visitors were satisfied. And 15 per cent visitors were satisfied. surprisingly 10 per cent of visitor are very dissatisfied.
But After refurbishment, there is completely change in visitors opinion. Satisfied visitors have increased to 40 per cent from 30 per cent and very satisfied visitors increased from 15 per cent to 35 per cent which was huge increase.
only 15 per cent visitors said it was dissatisfied which decreased from 40 to 15. The remaining 10 per cent shared between very dissatisfied and no response.
On the overall, comparing both pie charts visitors changed their satisfaction opinion after it reconstructed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Surprisingly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39800995025 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0263154468 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6299260072 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4615384615 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277418746694 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129103910612 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894278493136 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162916162852 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075939758399 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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