The table below shows personal saving as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000.
The table compares the proportion of personal salary devoted to saving in seven countries; Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, UK and USA in three time periods. It is measured in percent.
Overall, it can be seen that almost all of percentage of personal saving in seven countries decreased, while UK increased from 1970 to 2000.
By 1970, Italy had the highest saving rate of 29.5%, followed by France with 18.7 and Japan with 17.6%, while Canada had the lowest rate with 5.6%. A closer look at the data reveals that in 1990, Italy was still the leading country, through its saving rate had declined to 17.6%, whereas in Canada, the saving rate had almost doubled to 11.5 and Germany was stabled with 13.6%.
By 2000, only three country; France, Japan and UK had rose from previous year. Morover, France and Japan were at same level led with 13.6%. Personal saving in Canada dropped dramatically to 1.9% and It was the lowest saving rate. Germany and USA remain decrease, 11,8% and 4.0% respectivelly.
Sentence: By 2000, only three country; France, Japan and UK had rose from previous year.
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Germany and USA remain decrease
Germany and USA remain decreasing
Sentence: Germany and USA remain decrease, 11,8 and 4.0 respectivelly.
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.621 4.0
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