The table illustrates the spending in American dollars that is prognosticated for environmental projects in different countries in the next five years and the pie chart demonstrates the proportion of different parts of the projects for the first year.
Taking a look at the table, for the first year the spending for West Africa will be 10.5 million dollars and for the following years it will decrease slightly. Also for Central American 20 million dollars is allocated for Year 1 and after a decline in the second year it will reach a plateau at 5 million dollars for the following years. In addition, the project in South-east Asia will need 30 million dollars for the first year and this amount will rise moderately in the further years, by taking account of a decrease in the second year and this project will have admittedly the biggest proportion of expenditure.
Turning to the pie chart, for the first year of all projects the salaries will make up half of the budget and Set-up costs will account for a mere 30% of the spending and the rest of money will be constituted by training and office expenses equally.
In a nutshell, the most expenditures are forecast for the projects in South-east Asia. Besides, in the first year of doing projects, salaries will have the biggest proportion of spending.
Thank you so much. In this
Thank you so much. In this sentence "the most expenditures are forecast for the projects in South-east Asia" I wanted to say that it is prognosticated that the biggest amount of money will be relevant to the project in South-east Asia.
'forecast' is a verb. You
'forecast' is a verb.
You can't put verb + verb.
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most of expenditures are predicted for the projects in South-east Asia
when you don't know the word exactly, don't use it.
Thank you so much but I used
Thank you so much but I used "forecast" as the past participle of "forecast".
I think the past and the past participle of "forecast" could be "forecast".
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the most expenditures are forecast for the projects
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Definitions of forecast
noun
a prediction or estimate of future events, especially coming weather or a financial trend.
"Together the two firms can provide financial forecasts for virtually every listed company in the world."
synonyms: prediction, prophecy, forewarning, prognostication, augury, divination, prognosis
verb
predict or estimate (a future event or trend).
"rain is forecast for eastern Ohio"
synonyms: predict, prophesy, prognosticate, foretell, foresee, forewarn of
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