The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
The table data illustrates the information regarding the women and man opinion in a city club for its various performance.
A glance at the figure reveals that an overwhelming majority of both sex are strongly satisfied with the club facilities than other counterparts.
As a matter of fact, equal proportion (35%) of female respondents agreed up the range of activity provided by center whereas significant number of people have replied that they are not satisfied with the existing service. As per the male participants 55% out of 100% have replied that they are very satisfied with the range of club activity and only one in 20 proportion have replied their grievance to the service. Moreover, nearly equal percentage of both sex group of respondent have replied as they are very satisfied with the city sports club while the proportionate respondents view regarding satisfied and not satisfied are below the 30 percent. Opening hours on the other hand found that an overwhelming majority of female respondent (72%) are more satisfied with the club opening time compared to only 44% of respondent who have said they are in the same category while a significant proportion of male’s view (37%) favored the not satisfied category relating to the club opening schedule in contrast to 3% of women in the same category in the question.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1063, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n in the same category in the question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, whereas, while, in contrast, as a matter of fact, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06334841629 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85936334229 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493212669683 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3727595299 43.030603864 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.5 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8333333333 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.23603664747 344% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154168202495 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843678296421 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433753781604 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111539199754 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018975179753 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.2329268293 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 61.2550243902 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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