The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries?

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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries?

The given table provides statistic data from the United Nation about social and economic indicators in four selected countries: Canada, Japan, Peru, and Zaire in 1994. Overall, Japan led in almost all indicators while Zaire became the lowest.

In that period, Japan led in annual income per person and life expectancy at birth with $ 15760 and 78 respectively. However, in the rate of daily calorie supply per person, Canada surpasses Japan at 3326 or about 500 above Japan. Uniquely, in adult literacy, the rate born of Japan and Canada experienced similar number in with almost 100 per cent.

On the other hand, Peru and Zaire became the two lowest countries, especially in annual income per person which just about one per cent of Japan. Then, in the number of life expectancy at birth, daily supply per person and adult literacy, their rates, in averages, were just two third of Japan statistics.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$15760'.
Suggestion: $15760
...erson and life expectancy at birth with $ 15760 and 78 respectively. However, in the ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01324503311 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36182377943 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6496549865 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0665487955302 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401078763657 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702769649884 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645590500831 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832957793392 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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