the table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by in million

Essay topics:

the table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by in million.

The table shows the number of people in million who watch sports on television and the number of viewers for four sports in four different countries.
In general terms, the number of people in America watch sport on television than the other countries. Besides, the table shows that tennis is the most popular on television in different countries except the USA.
It is clear from the table chart show that the total number of viewers for tennis is nearly 26 million people and in each country about 6-7 million people watch it. On the other hand, not many people like watching motor rcing on television compared to the other sports except th UK. In the USA AND Canada only 1,5 million people and 1,1 million people respectively watch motor racing while it is more popular in the UK and Australia ( 6,4 million people and 3,7 million people respectively). Golf is the most popular sport in the USA with 11,2 million viewers but it is not as popular in the other countries.

Votes
Average: 5.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...The table shows the number of people in million who watch sports on television and the ...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is more popular in the UK and Australia 6,4 million people and 3,7 million peopl...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69590643275 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32244009281 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450292397661 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9565327753 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292878550801 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162235999718 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810685916326 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254046780974 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571529432907 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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