The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table illustrates the amounts of fast food consumption in Melbourne over a period of 20 years.

It is clear that the amounts of all types of convenience food increase over the period shown. Overall, hamburgers are by far the most popular choice for Melbourne consumers.

In 2005, 40 units of Hamburgers were consumed, compared to only 5 units of Salad. Now, people cut their hamburgers consumption by 2 units but Salads are consumed more with 15 units recorded. By 2025, the amount of salads consumed is predicted to continue to jump up by 25 units, becoming the third preferred food while that of Hamburgers is also expected to bounce back by 13.

Some striking differences are not seen in the consumption of others. Despite there is some gradual increases, Fried Chicken remains to be the second most consumed food in every year, ranging from 35 to 35. Additionally, the figures for fried rice and noodles rises and is anticipated to continue but only reach under 10 units by 2025.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86470588235 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70489112279 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.328838253 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130381685237 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555205876406 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634753220049 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986121136423 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685228492367 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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