The tables and pie chart illustrate the findings of a poll considering customer satisfaction of a new department store in New Zealand.Generally speaking, the majority of visitors were satisfied with the shops, restaurants and the design of the mall. Both

Essay topics:

The tables and pie chart illustrate the findings of a poll considering customer satisfaction of a new department store in New Zealand.

Generally speaking, the majority of visitors were satisfied with the shops, restaurants and the design of the mall. Both men and women were delighted with shops, having only 20 per cent disapproval rating for both sexes, but twice as much male respondents didn't give any comments about shopping facilities compared to women, accounting for 18 and 9 per cent respectively. But men were much more positive about the restaurants, with 80 per cent approval rating and with only 5 per cent disapproval rate. Women, on the other hand, were less positive, with only 59 per cent of them who liked the restaurant service and 21 per cent who were dissatisfied with it. When asked about the design of the shopping center, 79 per cent of both men and women liked it, while only 10 per cent considered the design to be bad and 11 per cent of respondents did not give any comments considering the issue.

The tables and pie chart illustrate the findings of a poll considering customer satisfaction of a new department store in New Zealand.

Generally speaking, the majority of visitors were satisfied with the shops, restaurants and the design of the mall. Both men and women were delighted with shops, having only 20 per cent disapproval rating for both sexes, but twice as much male respondents didn't give any comments about shopping facilities compared to women, accounting for 18 and 9 per cent respectively. But men were much more positive about the restaurants, with 80 per cent approval rating and with only 5 per cent disapproval rate. Women, on the other hand, were less positive, with only 59 per cent of them who liked the restaurant service and 21 per cent who were dissatisfied with it. When asked about the design of the shopping center, 79 per cent of both men and women liked it, while only 10 per cent considered the design to be bad and 11 per cent of respondents did not give any comments considering the issue.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...xes, but twice as much male respondents didnt give any comments about shopping facili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79213483146 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70933919506 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.183382952 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305794418147 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227010945308 0.103423049105 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223586226271 0.0843802449381 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397852199883 0.15604864568 255% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.236956597294 0.0819641961636 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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