The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cites in the same week in May 2007

Essay topics:

The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cites in the same week in May 2007.

The tables provide information about the temperature and the hours of daylight in Mumbai and Moscow for the week of May 2007. The temperature is Celsius.

Overall, it is seen clearly from both tables that Mumbai had the highest temperature than Moscow, and Moscow had more hours of daylight in the period.

To comment with, as regards the temperature, accounted for 33c in Mumbai, which remained the same on Sunday, a decline of 1c was observed on Saturday. Moreover, Moscow comprised 8c on Friday, which increased to 10c and 13 on Saturday and Sunday respectively in the year 2007. Therefore, the temperature was more in Mumbai.

Furthermore, the hours of daylight in Mumbai was around 13 hours on Friday and Sunday, an incline of 10 minutes was found on Saturday. Lastly, the rate for Moscow fluctuated between 4 AM and 10 PM throughout the time. Hence, The hours of daylight were higher in Moscow than in Mumbai.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, lastly, may, moreover, therefore, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91719745223 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72478984417 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541401273885 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5637747347 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24341858431 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11712945171 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124189787566 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189202110471 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149884151242 0.0819641961636 183% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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