Task 1: The tasks below show the top 10 countries in terms of tourist destination, revenue and spending. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The three charts provided illustrate the connections among the top 10 countries in terms of tourist destinations, revenue and spending and it is interesting to note that there are correlations between each pairs.
Overall, the top countries with the highest investment on tourism had received the greatest earnings and the largest number of tourists, except for Japan and the Netherlands.
Looking closely at the data, the correlation between top destinations and top earners is likely to be not totally accurate. While having 47.1 million visitors, stood at the fourth place, the United States was leading in revenue, namely 74.2 billion dollars, as three times higher than that of France which had the largest number of tourists (70 million). The relationship between Spain and Italy is similar to the case of the USA and France.
As can be noticed from the information that the higher the expenditure spent on tourism, the greater the income gained. This trend is appropriate for most of the top countries except for Japan and the Netherlands, which expense on tourism was among the top 10 regions, however did not appear on the top famous tourist attractions as well as top earners. While Poland and Mexico got 18.8 and 19.3 million tourists, they did not appear among the top earners, and though profit up to 8.6 billion dollars, Australia was not recorded as the top popular destinations for tourists.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urist destinations, revenue and spending and it is interesting to note that there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, well, while, as to, except for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08189655172 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68976223814 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0855803334 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.375 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165331266433 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706809677332 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583629148249 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104854258816 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478365935056 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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