The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tow diagrams illustrates the information regarding general features of AAA accountancy –main office and the status after renovation.
In the first figure, front desk was right in front of the entrance in the south western corner and next to it in the northern side was the account office. Similarly, processing office and new customers office was planned to the alongside of the account office to the eastern side where there was a separate information desk, fax, and copier machine was planned in each of these office rooms along with the separate entrance gate. Apart from this, storage room was planned opposite to the processing room and the payroll office was in between the storage room and manager’s office of south east corner in the question. Finally, meeting room and lunch room was planned in the opposite to the manager’s room towards the northern east side according to the question.
Over the period of time after renovation, front desk and storage room was dismantle and focused was given to larger the front desk in such place. Moreover, storage room was shifted in the northern west corner and a sofa set was planned in the place of storage room and payroll office. In addition to that, two larger size of information desk was planned in the area of processing and new customer office and a combine fax and photocopier machine along with an information desk was planned in the central of main office room. It is also worth noticing that the three separate room such as manager’s office, meeting room and the cafeteria were in the same location in the question.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...e. Similarly, processing office and new customers office was planned to the alongside of ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...according to the question. Over the period of time after renovation, front desk and storag...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'dismantled'.
Suggestion: dismantled
...vation, front desk and storage room was dismantle and focused was given to larger the fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60219037063 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416974169742 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6421940374 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107879004394 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607618150383 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053420020124 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106275883454 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414542053869 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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