The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The two maps illustrate the different of traffic and facility towards to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that the changes only occurred in southern of a city hospital while on northern of a city hospital remained same on both figured years.
On 2007, in Hospital Road and City Road had junction. However, on 2010, roundabouts are built on junction between City Road and Hospital Road and in front of City Hospital that connected to Hospital Road. In contrast, on the Ring Road was not changed on both years.
On 2007, on Hospital Road, Bus Stop located on east side and west side while on 2010, Bus Stop built on West Part of Hospital Road and changed into Bus Station. Moreover, Car Park facilities were totally changed compared with 2007 where it just only provided on east side of Hospital Road for staff and public, while in 2010, new car park divided by two locations with the new one for public situated on the east part of City Hospital and the old one used only for staff.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62983425414 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24865272077 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475138121547 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4999679117 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42318146957 0.215688989381 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244722496 0.103423049105 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120511953301 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291776869001 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985164923559 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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