the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993and March 1999.
The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993and March 1999.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph gives details rates of unemployment in US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
Generally, the data is providing information about percentage of work force toward rates of unemployment in US and Japan.
Firstly, in March 1993, rates of unemployment in Japan had 2.5 percentage of work force, and climbed even high to almost 3 percentage. From March 1994, it began higher of percentage approximately 3.8 percentage and fluctuated slightly to next line. However, in March 1995, it began to fall to just above 3.6 percentage, but in March 1996 increased dramatically approxim...
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rates of unemployment in US was higher than Japan
rates of unemployment in US was higher than that in Japan
it began fall to just above 6.3 percentage
it began to fall to just above 6.3 percentage
flaws:
The conclusion may be not properly:
'To sum up, percentage of work force toward rates of unemployment in US and Japan is remained reasonably in March 1999.'
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