Village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994 Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century The map shows the development of the village

Essay topics:

Village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994
Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map shows the development of the village.

teenth century. The map shows the development of the village.
The map indicates the growth of a village named Chorleywood from 1868 to 1994
Overall, it is apparent that along with the development of the village, transport facility was also improved through out the shown period
In 1868 to 1883, the village covered a small area situated next to one of the main road. However, during the next 139 years, it expanded to the south forming a larger space alongside the main road and crossed by a new railway constructed from west to east in 1909
From 1922 to 1970, Chorleywood witnessed significant development in its land when there were two areas, one located in the left corner of the railway and the mainroad and the other was on the right hand of the land where the station was situated. In the final period, noticeably, a new motorway was built to the east of the village in 1970 running north to south along the map, which was also the center of further development of the village, which wook place around the motorway intersections, the railway and one of the main roads

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teenth
teenth century. The map shows the development ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...e, transport facility was also improved through out the shown period In 1868 to 1883, the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68062827225 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53003665913 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.4926829268 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.069098814 43.030603864 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.5 112.824112599 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.75 22.9334400587 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212451940597 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135557155626 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112400648203 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147167376061 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984850820041 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.2329268293 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.9970731707 189% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.