The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for the poor in undeveloped countries but also for industrialised and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.
In this day and age, there has been a sharp rise in the number of residents all over the world which exerts a multitude of negative impacts on both poverty-stricken and prosperous nations.
In terms of poor countries, overpopulation resulted in the depletion of natural resources and shortage of basic amenities. When more and more children are being born, the budget of the government to pay for medical care, schools and accommodations is limited. Thus, they have to put forward mining resources regularly attempting to provide the best supply for promising young generations as well as lessen the financial burden.
Similarly, the job market is being affected in industrialized and developing nations as fewer jobs are available to support a large number of people, therefore, the unemployment rate is getting higher and higher which lead to crime such as thieves, drug cartels, and even violence when they are competing for good living standards.
There are 2 crucial ways to prevent the situation from being uncontrolled. Firstly, decreasing the rate of birth-giving by dint of declaring new policies about family planning and population control. For instance, a family that has only one or two children will have at least one privilege for their kid’s education or childcare. Furthermore, a few campaigns or meetings to raise awareness among people regarding the serious causes of overpopulation increasing alarmingly without a sign of reduction until some possible solutions will be taken into account.
To Conclude, overpopulation is a warning concern that contributes to many detrimental effects on both rich and poor nations. Therefore, not until the government and each citizen join hands together, can we address this global issue effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41304347826 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08056254188 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 106.607317073 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7878100423 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.818181818 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 5.23603664747 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18562213145 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530848113934 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344325762097 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775604713635 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377493393396 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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